UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:31 pm by UniHiGuy

K thnx

Sun Jan 02, 2011 3:58 am by Foreigner

It's very good, but I think you could make the storyline more detailed on the character. It's the slightest bit general, but I'd give it a 9.5.

Sun Jan 02, 2011 4:55 am by UniHiGuy

Thnx! Glad u like it! Dont know if i can make it more specific, its already very long

Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:01 pm by Brisingr04

I agree with the others that it is the slightest bit general...

Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:57 am by UniHiGuy

Yah, but once again it would then be quite long. How long is too long, anyways?

Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:01 am by beatlesfan

Probably isnt a limit, but it should be short and sweet, not a novel

Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:31 am by UniHiGuy

Is this too long?

Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:16 pm by Brisingr04

I think that it's perfectly fine length-wise. There are much longer ones out there

Tue Jan 04, 2011 4:22 am by Foreigner

Great! Loved it!

Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:07 pm by UniHiGuy

Thanks! Glad you like it!