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UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

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UniHiGuy

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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:31 pm

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

K thnx
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Foreigner

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Post Sun Jan 02, 2011 3:58 am

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

It's very good, but I think you could make the storyline more detailed on the character. It's the slightest bit general, but I'd give it a 9.5.
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UniHiGuy

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Post Sun Jan 02, 2011 4:55 am

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Thnx! Glad u like it! Dont know if i can make it more specific, its already very long
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Brisingr04

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Post Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:01 pm

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

I agree with the others that it is the slightest bit general...
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UniHiGuy

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Post Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:57 am

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Yah, but once again it would then be quite long. How long is too long, anyways?
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beatlesfan

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Post Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:01 am

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Probably isnt a limit, but it should be short and sweet, not a novel
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UniHiGuy

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Post Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:31 am

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Is this too long?
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Brisingr04

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Post Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:16 pm

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

I think that it's perfectly fine length-wise. There are much longer ones out there
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Foreigner

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Post Tue Jan 04, 2011 4:22 am

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Great! Loved it! :D :lol:
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UniHiGuy

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Post Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:07 pm

Re: UniHiGuy Prologue Competition Entry

Thanks! Glad you like it!
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