Nathans Prologues

Entry 1

"8 pieces of Eight." the sailor muttered. the myth rembered from childhood days suddenly reappears in your mind as the old sailor in the corner of the bar regailed you with tales of his journeys through the 8 hidden bays of the world searching for these sunken treasures. This story, this legend, this myth all of a sudden became believable.

Later that night as you stumble home you realise you must find out if this is myth or reality. so early next morning you set about discovering more and set up base and from here direct your search for the 8 pieces of Eight. starting with a simple sub and an old boat your father left you. you set of in search of treasure, adventure, fame and fortune...

Entry 2

i leaned in close, a whiff of ale filled my nostrils and i paused a second. the old man glared at me and whispered "you need a sunmarine and a boat".
"i havent got either of those" i replied.
"take mine sonny, my sailing days are done" the sailor breathed at me causing me to wrinkle my nose "that which you seek lies on the bottom of the roughest locations in the sea. my boats are basic but you should be able to make enough money by being shrewd to upgrade them more than i ever diid, there are 10 places you could start, choose wisely my son"

with that he lay still... i looked hard at him... still noticing him breathing i presume he'd passed out. the next morning i stood at the pier, took a deep breath and set of

please can i have some feeedback

I like it quite a bit! My only problem is that it is, in my opinion, a bit too short. I do really like it though!!

thatsok i know there short but the intentioon is to try and get people into the game quickly rather than them spending longer reading the introduction than they do on playing the game

theyre good! well i think length doesnt matter.... long stories with pictures.... short ones mabe on a paper

i think they xhould be short rather than long so people dont get all the info straight away and then become curioous about the game and hence want to play