Haypi Prologue Competition

A cold winters day a man his wife and his beloved daughter sitting by the fire. Two men charge in the door and take the wife and daughter leaving a note of instructions. The note reads " get us the 8 sets of these valuable relics if you ever want to see your wife and kid again there should be one somewhere around your port. The man grabs the keys to his ship and sets off to find the relics to save his family.

This is my story

Once opon a time there was a kingdom called haypi kingdom.  It that was so successful they had all of Africa. The king started hearing roomers that there was sunken treasures .  But was so far out they would need new ships. There was eight treasures.  His daughter was almost old enough to marry . Het father was greaty so there was a challenge.  who could retrieve the entire set can marry his daughter.

Ok, honestly ppl, learn to read the original note and my many replies telling u not to post ur prologues on this page, but please stop putting prologues on this note, they belong as their own topic!!!

I see that it past competitions the winner can also opt for an iPad. Does that apply to this competition?

Question: Should we create our own proper nouns in the story? (give names to characters/places) or not. Also, is the storyline already created and they are looking for a prologue that intergrates well with it or does our prolouge help shape the storyline?

Storyline has already been created, they just need a prologue, and you could use proper nouns, but not requested, you could do if you wanted to though.

How long is too long?

I dont see how that can get a sensible or accurate answer.

How long is too long?

As long as you think it needs to be to be interesting, informative, but not make the user board and close the game right away.

That is my opinion

A new era has come to the world, an era of adventure. People are finally beginning to trust new technologies enough to use them regularly, men use their knowledge of machines to impress women, the strangest thing of this new era is the discoveries that are being made: new lands, new people, science is evolving beyond imagination, and last but not least, what lies over the people's heads. Gods have made themselves known for the first time in ages, telling their witnesses of ancient relics built by an ancient people as tribute to these gods, the first to locate and collect eight specific relics would be rewarded with unimaginable wealth; whether it be wealth of knowledge, currency, or power was untold. There's only one way to find out what exactly this wealth is...

You are a young orphan, you were born at sea, on the same voyage that your parents died on. You have been in sea trading as long as you can remember, you now have your own trade boat and submarine, you will need them and all your acquired skills in order to complete this task which the gods have set for you. You will need to venture far and wide, and many challenges await you, what you do now will forge the future of the entire world...