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Caliee

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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:48 pm

Caliee's Prologue!

Hiya guys!
I love story time so I figured why not!  My first entry is more of a ad/story detailing the game. The second is more of a prologue.

Long ago civilizations set sail to uncover the worlds greatest mystery...the ocean! What lies beneath the waters surface will soon be uncovered as groups of adventurers set sail from the 10 worlds ports to discover treasure, knowledge and respect of the human race!
Each using they're own skills they will scour the ocean bed to find precious relics believed to have been lost long ago! Embark on this epic journey of sea exportation and unlock the future!

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As the early morning sun crested the horizon, the warm glow filled her cabin and roused her from sleep. She slipped out of bed and prepared for the day. Exiting the captains quarters she greeted the crew that was eagerly preparing the submarine for a day of exploration. Two long days of sailing from one of the worlds 10 largest trading ports had brought her here to where one of the eight lost relics was believed to be. 
Excitement began to overcome her as she felt her heart beat faster. The calm oceans waves crashed against the hull of the ship and the smell of salt water filled her nose. Closing her eyes she was taken back to days on her fathers ship. She had taken his place after his passing and intended to make him proud by discovering what others had not. 
As she stood reminiscing over fond Memories of the past, a crew member shouted from the submarine, "My lady, she's ready to go beneath!"
Her lips gave way to a smile, today was the day, she knew it in her heart.

Please let me know what ya think! 
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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:54 pm

Re: Caliee's Prologue!

It's pretty good, but who is "she"?
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devryan13

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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:09 pm

Re: Caliee's Prologue!

Very nice job :)
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Post Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:52 pm

Re: Caliee's Prologue!

Its really good :shock:
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Post Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:18 pm

Re: Caliee's Prologue!

I enjoyed it very much. I just created my own before looking at the other entries. Yours would have inspired me to write what I did...creepy ;)
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Caliee

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Post Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:49 am

Re: Caliee's Prologue!

Thanks guys! Glad you like it! :D
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