Haypi Inc. Logo Entry ~ Vayneglory

Omg I hate u that's what I was doing and mine was almost done ;(

Added two new ones.

And yes Blue, I just like to argue for no reason. I don't care about people putting more than one entry I just wanted to raise some hell because I was bored ^.^

[Sylarius]

Second one is your best one.

Good font: Check

Good swords: check

Good shield: X

I really think the shield needs a tad bit more detail if you can spare some. But as sly said, your best one is #2

I know the shield needs more but I don't know what to do with it x.x

Awesome work!

I think the third ones the best it looks more medieval

I'd suggest printing it, tracing it's general outline (or draw your own if you want) and give it some more defined edges, instead of the blobby implied ones it has now.

I'm still hugely underwhelmed by the shield in each of the 3 designs. It just needs to look... Less fake. That's all I can think of. Currently, it's comparable to a mass of copper colored material with awkward edges and bevels. Like shade said, see if you can add some life to it with a sketch. Another complaint I have lies with the text. Even though it's been vastly improved in the second design, it still leaves me with something to be desired. My suggestion would be to inlay or etch it into the shield.

Again, your logo is still a candidate for the win, Vayne. Just... That shield...

maybe a bit damaged shield?