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Hanhula

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Post Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:22 pm

Hail the awesome logos! [Added 2nd logo]

Here's my logo for Haypi :D
Please suggest how I can improve it, I really want to win because it would be amazing for me to win!

ETA: Another logo! This one's so hot, it's on FIRE! Literally!
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Last edited by Hanhula on Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Logis

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Post Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:39 pm

Re: Hail the awesome logo!

I don't think the white text really stands out enough.
Looking good so far though.
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Hanhula

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Post Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:08 pm

Re: Hail the awesome logos! [Added 2nd logo]

Added flame logo.
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Agenine

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Post Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:43 pm

Re: Hail the awesome logos! [Added 2nd logo]

Well, I'm not saying mine's better, but you can choose to have the flames behind the text instead of the front.
http://www.haypi.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=90&t=5704

Use some effects on the font, such as gradient, overlay or something else rather than smudging the text.

Otherwise, it's good enough. Maybe use a stroke around the picture so you get some kind of a border.

Constructive critisism, that's what we learn from, isn't it? ;)
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iRook

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Post Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:11 pm

Re: Hail the awesome logos! [Added 2nd logo]

Heres the thing: The first logo- can you imagine a red block as the logo? I would feather the edges a ton, or use the eraser and erase the edges to soften them a lot. It just wouldnt work, having a block as the logo. Nice though.
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Hanhula

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Post Mon Oct 18, 2010 5:52 am

Re: Hail the awesome logos! [Added 2nd logo]

Thanks for all the advice and critiscism. I'm fairly new to photoshop, so I don't know how to do much :S I'm actually taking Digital Arts class in school soon, so I wish this comp had come later!
So... how do I add gradients to text? I don't really get feathering edges, either, but I'm going to use the eraser on the flame on now.

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