Signature...

Maybe a very slight fuzzying (I'm pretty sure thats the technical term) of the shoulder so it doesn't look quite so cut out. Also, its a little more difficult, but if you can lessen the amount of yellow on his shoulder it would look more like he belongs with the blue background. Just my opinions It looks good and improved from your last one. Looking forward to your next one!

I think you did great

hmm make it a bit more darker lol

I like it

Updated:

made background a tad bit darker and made main text red.
Re-did the right to make it smoother
Didn't know how to get rid of the yellow >.<

use a darker red

So demanding...it is pretty dark

it almost looks pink it doesnt stand out

srry and i cant belive i am saying this but dude is right it does look kinda pink....

Bah! I hate you all xp
I'll fix it later