A World of Our Own- Competion Entry

In one world or another there is always a cynical irony in the workings of said universe. one could say existence itself is a paradoxical conundrum in which problems breed solutions and solutions breed new problems. however, we strive in our seemingly surmountable endeavors to overcome these obsicals. it is more interesting the manner in which we approach and strive to surpass this frustrating predicimant than the actual end result. haypi is a world of rather arbitrary yet undeniably entertaining strategic war efforts, but it has, in my experience, proved to be much more. it shows a test of logical solutions while also exposing our irrational and risky behavior that inexplicably can often lead to success, and even when we fail, provide us with new incentive to try again. in our failures, especcially those by which we are most caught off guard, we fond ourselfs facing new issues and even enemies we wish we hadn't made. though through all these situations we survive through stubborn resiliation, accompanied or facilitated largely by loyalty of our alliances, though through false security can also lead to disastrous results. I began haypi with no real intention to succeed, playing leisurely with little intention of becoming Any major influence in the game. then  my fiance joined and it is amusing the accelerated expansion of my sphere of influence from there on. I thereby discovered many strategic advantages I had previously deemed unnecessary and was exhillerated by this sense of discovery. I was captivated with the siezure of forts and the defeat of rivals, proudly fighting among my mates in my alliance in times of war and gladly putting myself at risk for my brothers and sisters. even when I lost I remained undiscouraged, driven by my enthrawlment  and desire to surpass the victors in my losses. I soon found myself being in the top 400 players and in the second most powerful alliance of server three. I climbed the rankings of the system and even with the merger of the separate servers I remained at a respectable ranking. i was fascinated by the complexity of  the society i had come to realize resided from the shared interests of such a diverse population of gamers. it seems a pity that the significance of relationships formed between the people that join this type of game are made a mockery, for although it's just a game, it is that simple and arbitrary aspect exactly that makes such a fantastic world, for what can be more real than the formation of a relationship and loyalty, however minut, to people whom you create a community with? haypi is more than a whimsical strategic game, it is a fascinating outlet for the observation of human behavior, psyhological reactions and procceses which facilitate all our actions, reactions, judgements, and overall mental state, in turn revealing our perceptual realities. Yet beyond that it is a place were people, all carrying their own stories, meet in a new frontier to create a world of our own. That is the true significance of haypi kingdom.

[SirPenguin]

I like it. I would suggest editing the ending.

thank you, i revised the ending, I hope its better,thank you for the input

wow, thats legit, I never thought of it like that. I hope u win dude