Fri Mar 18, 2011 4:38 pm
My story ( article submission)
" We're under attack!!!" screamed the guard whilst ringing the bell
" Everybody to there postitions!!!" shouted the king.
I rushed to my position, the stable, whilst noticing the king ( So_na_gi) was approaching me. " do you need anything sir" I said nervously
"can I have a minute please" said the king.
"Yes of course sir" I said
" well I noticed you were achieving better in your work at the stable and wondered if you would like to join my army you would be in charge of all of the cavalry." said the king
" yes sir, I'd be glad to sir" I said excitedly
" ok you can start immediately " he said
I ran to my horse and commanded the other knights to follow me and we headed towards the invading army mainly made of infantry and archer but we could see some catapults heading our way.
The opposing army had approximately 600 thousand infantry, 150 thousand archer , 75 thousand cavalry and 100 thousand catapults on the way.
Our army was out numbered we only had 150 Thousand infantry, 300 thousand cavalry and 50 thousand catapults.
The battle commenced when the opposing army blew their horn.
"attack!!" shouted the king
I lead our cavalry to attack whilst jas (jas365) and Owen (Charger25) commanded their armies jas head of infantry and Owen head of catapults.
The opposing army was winning we only wiped out 200 thousand infantry and all of there cavalry and we had lost all of our infantry and 50 thousand of our cavalry, we were destined to lose.
Then as if by miracle we gained the upper hand when the king came to help on his horse. They we down to 100 thousand infantry, 50 thousand archers and 25 thousand catapults and we were down to 150 thousand cavalry and 20 thousand catapults.
Hours later we had won, they had given up, they only had their king and 10 thousand infantry left.
Me , Jas, Owen and King So_na_gi headed back into the city of haypi.
The king asked for a meal to be serve to us four so we could talk about the war.
" So_na_gi how come you could kill them so easily?"
" well I've got my sword enhanced to level 20"
The End
Im sorry about and missing punctuation of missing capital letters it my stupid iPods fault , sorry
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" Everybody to there postitions!!!" shouted the king.
I rushed to my position, the stable, whilst noticing the king ( So_na_gi) was approaching me. " do you need anything sir" I said nervously
"can I have a minute please" said the king.
"Yes of course sir" I said
" well I noticed you were achieving better in your work at the stable and wondered if you would like to join my army you would be in charge of all of the cavalry." said the king
" yes sir, I'd be glad to sir" I said excitedly
" ok you can start immediately " he said
I ran to my horse and commanded the other knights to follow me and we headed towards the invading army mainly made of infantry and archer but we could see some catapults heading our way.
The opposing army had approximately 600 thousand infantry, 150 thousand archer , 75 thousand cavalry and 100 thousand catapults on the way.
Our army was out numbered we only had 150 Thousand infantry, 300 thousand cavalry and 50 thousand catapults.
The battle commenced when the opposing army blew their horn.
"attack!!" shouted the king
I lead our cavalry to attack whilst jas (jas365) and Owen (Charger25) commanded their armies jas head of infantry and Owen head of catapults.
The opposing army was winning we only wiped out 200 thousand infantry and all of there cavalry and we had lost all of our infantry and 50 thousand of our cavalry, we were destined to lose.
Then as if by miracle we gained the upper hand when the king came to help on his horse. They we down to 100 thousand infantry, 50 thousand archers and 25 thousand catapults and we were down to 150 thousand cavalry and 20 thousand catapults.
Hours later we had won, they had given up, they only had their king and 10 thousand infantry left.
Me , Jas, Owen and King So_na_gi headed back into the city of haypi.
The king asked for a meal to be serve to us four so we could talk about the war.
" So_na_gi how come you could kill them so easily?"
" well I've got my sword enhanced to level 20"
The End
Im sorry about and missing punctuation of missing capital letters it my stupid iPods fault , sorry
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