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devryan13

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Post Fri Dec 31, 2010 8:31 pm

devryan's prologue number 1

The riches of the vast seas could be yours. The world is full of grand treasures, and magnificent sights to see. The emperor has been altruistic, and has procured a ship and submarine for you to become the next distinguished sailor. Exploring the sea, from the floor to the smooth glass surface is the goal of the glorious sailors that make up your honorable crew. Your brilliant mind will be the deciding factor of the fate of your great success or grim failure, as you choose what to improve, and what to ignore. You control your fate through your trade, and mind.

The eight relics of the sea are regarded to be the prime treasure of the seas. The rich prizes and fame to gain from collecting them all would astonish you into disbelief. Discovering the relics of the sea will be a pain filled task, but the rewards and fame are well worth.

It is time to follow in the great steps of the empire, you will make the difference in the world of the seas, have fun, and ...

Set Sail.





Note: Entry Number 1, I will work to improve my writing skills :)
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Caliee

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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:51 pm

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

Nicely done Ryan! :)
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Post Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:17 pm

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

That is a nice prologe.





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Post Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:35 am

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

I believe quality before quantity dev. And this has much potential but it seems as u r aiming for fast quantity not slow quality. Sit back and read criticism on other prologues and Use it to make yours better
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Post Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:52 am

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

Meh.
Can't stop, won't stop.
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Post Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:16 pm

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

Very cool. Sorry it's taken me so long to read it. 
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Post Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:22 pm

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

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Post Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:30 am

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

Dev's got the right idea!
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Post Mon Jan 31, 2011 10:14 pm

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

Thank you for ideas ^^
I want to finish refer1
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Post Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:25 am

Re: devryan's prologue number 1

Hello dev!! Thanks fr the mutes upon mutes back in s13 :p lmfao

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