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Krull97

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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:28 pm

My prologue entry

Scraping the horizon lays a deep and harsh beauty. This unforgiving place that hides many undiscovered treasures, and there are many brave people who seek those treasures. These people of strong hearts begin setting up their ships and submarines ready for the dangers that lay ahead, all for priceless relics which will bring them fame, fortune and all that come with it.
You are one of those brave people... you could start today a ship captain, and finish a millionaire.
War... War never changes...
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Krull97

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Post Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:37 pm

Re: My prologue entry

litte short i know but i was just giving it a go, wouldnt mind your opinions or what i could do to improve. */10 would be nice too,
thanks.
War... War never changes...
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Krull97

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Post Mon Mar 07, 2011 6:29 pm

Re: My prologue entry

4th yey :)
War... War never changes...

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