Haypi Logo Comp Design

I'm a newbie with photo shop and stuff like that and this is my first ever logo . This is a draft and only one of the colour designs I've made so please comment on any changes you think should be made. Thanks

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[redgun]

I really like it ^_^

I'll comment more when I'm not on my iDevice.

These are all one design with slight differences.

2a

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2b

Haypi Logo 2d.jpg (85.95 KiB) Viewed 4921 times

2c

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Can someone give me some feedback? Thanks

I think the second one is the best, but you need to tidy up some of the letters... I can't really see the a and p

Thanks for the feedback

Here's another type of design + shortened version

Logo 3

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Short

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[redgun]

Tbh the second one looks a bit more like Haypo >,< but that's just to me, looks much better with the blue

I really like the last one!!!! (like really, REALLY like..)

Thanks Redgun