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straatboy

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Post Sat Apr 23, 2011 9:25 pm

haypi article competition , just live your life good

It was Tuesday night and I was watching TV. than i saw on the news that somebody was murdered. Fortunately this will not happen to me or my family or friends, I thought. the next day i went to school and everyone was talking to each other. so i asked what happend. and than they said imad is murdered last night. after i heard this, i asked was it imad bouckrici? than they said yes. damn imad was my best friend , i couldnt believe that he was gone. he just had a argument with someone about a girl. everything inside my body broked. for a short time it seemed that everything around me stopped. i went home and i fellt on my knees and cried cried and cried. i didnt spoke to my friends i olso didnt went to school anymore, i ignored my parents. imad and i were in a gang. but now i stepped out of it, and after that the members beat me up broke my arm etc. i was issolating me. the only thing that i wanted was being alone. but i needed someone who i can share my story with. so i was searching for online games and after 6 days i found haypi. i learned people, shared my story with them, they helped me. and after 18 days playing haypi i found somebody, i was very very lucky because he was a psychologist. he gave me advice how to deal with it, how i most go on now. after speaking to him i went outside in real life. i went to school again learned new friends. if haypi kingdom didnt excist i would never reached this. words are not enough to thank my friend the psychologist for all the help he gave me. my best friend who i knowed for 8 years is dead. i am 16 now and must go on with my life. the person who murdered imad only get 11 years jail , he took somebody live and get away with it for only 11 years jail.

sorry for my bad englisch, but dont look to the grammatica but to the story i wrote .

in honor of imad bouckrici <3 , steeds in mijn hart maar niet in het oog.
always in my heart but not in my eye.
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straatboy

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Post Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:33 pm

Re: haypi article competition , just live your life good

To be or not to be.

To learn your enemies, to learn to fight, to build, to farm, to talk to each other. Keep your enemies closer to you than your best friends. That’s all about haypi kingdom. It’s a massive online game. You can develop your brains just by playing this game. People over the hole world are playing this game so there are many languages. You can make friends. You can learn how to fight. How to deal with other people. And you can do all of that , on just a little screen of your mobile. So sign in make a account and rise to the top. You would be crazy if you didn’t do it.
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Post Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:57 pm

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hey straatboy.

i read your story and yes your english is not so perfect but my englisch olso isnt so good:P, but damn losing a friend on that way , i feel very sorry for you straat. but just remember carpediem, when imad is looking down on the earht and he see this story you wrote than he will be very proud that you are his friend
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Post Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:02 am

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yes osc4r i agree.


straatboy i dont know if this hole story is true, but if it isnt than you are very clever to invent such story . so i think it is true :P
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Post Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:08 am

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straatboy are you dutch? because i olso knew that guy. did he live in heerlen?
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Post Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:22 am

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Great article. It's touching and just moving. With a bit of editing it'd be fine.
For Better or for worse.


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