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2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

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Post Sat Mar 26, 2011 4:32 am

2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

Hello again.It's Lightcry.In today's post I'll be telling a short story which I made that contains a moral lesson.This lesson can be used in Haypi Kingdom.Lets get started :)

A long time ago their was king who enjoyed the perks of the world.Gold,coins,women,violence and a lot of food.At the age of 30 he took the title of king and ruled 100 acres of land in Haypi Kingdom.At first he didn't know what to do.he sat on his throne for days thinking for the best of his kingdom.and then it came to him.he sought out gold.the king without the advice from the oracle mustered an army of 20000 infantry,10000 Calvary,40000 archers and 50000 catapults.Within a year he conquered more than 300 acres of land and obtained so much plunder that he held feast every night.Thousands of innocent people were killed,their homes destroyed,families separated,women defiled and their lives ruined.The king had no regret.His heart and mind were corrupt as the dark of the night.His reign continued on and soon he had the largest army within all of Haypi kingdom.On the 3rd of fall one of the oracles warned the king of a massive army that would conquer him."It be best to repent to the gods you once served."said the oracle.The king replied sarcastically "The gods have nothing on me".Then he ordered the oracle to be executed.The oracles last words before being hung were "crosses will cross your path.Beware of the cold." and then he dangled like a puppet on a rope.The fall was a bad season.Crops weren't being produced.Trading partners were dying off and the kingdom was in a depression.This king was angry that all of this was happening so he summoned all the witches in Haypi kingdom.They screeched and yelled that a bigger consequence was to fall upon his household.The king laughed at the remark that what was happening was because of a consequence for his wrong doings.He then ordered the witches to be burned at the stake.the king lost more than 2/3rds of his army and 250 acres of land engulfed in flames.all of the kings sons perished in mysterious ways.One was in their sleep,another in hunting and another with his eyes pressed in.The king sat on his throne and began to cry.he was filled with remorse from his irrational decisions but he still didn't turn away from sin.After the depression and famine 7 years of prosperity occurred and the king had twice what he had before."The king was possessed by the dark lords themselves."said one of the kings officials.he was hung for treason.The fall season was ending and winter hit hard with a harsh storm.The king sent 400000 infantry,100000 Calvary,500000 archers and 100000 catapults on a hunt to obtain resources and currency.A week later one man from the infantry unit came back stained in dry bloods and with one less arm.He approached the king and told him "they came from nowhere.From the dust they were made and dust they'd go back.In 7 days you will die."The injured soldier dropped dead and a cloud of gray dispersed from his body as if it was the only thing that kept him alive.For the next six days the king covered his entire kingdom with his army.More than four million infantry,2 million Calvary,3 million archers,and 1 million catapults.Filled with fear and anxiety he used every single gold he had and double timed the weapon and armor making.his troops were ready for anything.The seventh day came and all eyes were fixed.The king was in his chamber.He slowly opened up a gold chest and in it was his fathers golden musket.Only he knew how to make it.His father forged the weapon himself.It was a masterpiece,capable of killing a man with the simple pulling of a trigger.The king grabbed the gun and took 5 cone shaped bullets.It was around 8pm when an archer spotted a man far away.he told the general and the general ordered the man to halt.The man didn't have a face nor any clothes on.His body was gray.The general asked him"who he was?"and the man opened up his mouth and responded as if their were millions inside of him "From dust we were made from and dust we'd return.Were here to kill you all."The General laughed along with those who surrounded him.Their laughter roared within the night.An intimidation so fearful.2500 skillful archers raised their bows and with the order of the general shot at the mysterious male.All arrows went through the male.The male dropped onto the ground and light dispersed form all his wounds.He then dispersed into the ground.The General wasn't sure if what he was seeing was real.All of a sudden hundreds of men were being formed by the dust.The general ordered all archers to kill the males.under the darkness of the arrows all mysterious males were once again "killed".Even a brighter light appeared.It was silent for 6 minutes.The night got extremely colder within seconds.A whisper filled every soldiers ears.It said "Crosses will cross your path.Beware of the cold."They turned to one another and questioned what it meant.Then they came out of nowhere.Hands grabbed onto every soldiers feet from the ground.Archers saw thousands upon thousands of males being created from dust.This time they were heavily armed and light was emitted from the cross on their shield.Most of the archers were blinded and shot each other.The mysterious males charged with such a roar that the infantry cried and pleaded for mercy.catapults where set on ablaze by the heat of the light.Calvary unit were turning corrosive.Archers eyes were being pressed in.Infantry was getting slaughtered by the numbers.The king form his chamber heard agonizing pain,yells,swords ripping threw flesh and armor.He knew it was his own men.The general was stabbed 25 times simultaneously.In a matter of 30 minutes the kings army was wiped out.What remained was a lake of blood.The mysterious males were in the hundreds of millions.They seized the city,killed everyone and burned everything.What was left was the King.All the mysterious males dispersed into dust but one.he walked through the metal gates,through walls,and then through the kings chamber.The king held the musket and shot all 5 rounds.The bullets entered the mysterious male but only light emitted.The male consumed the injuries and healed up within the blink of an eye.the king began to weep and asked "why was he doing this?"The male replied "The real God took account for all your wrong doings.Today you pay for them with your life and everything you had.You are currently 2 steps away from Hell and 998 from Heaven.The first step to Hell Will be your death.The next is for you to walk into the fiery gates themselves."The king asked "Who they were?"The male replied with the tone of millions of voices "Just a little bit of Heaven."A dagger was formed in the males hand.He then brutally stabbed the king in the face over 50 times.The deed was done.He then dispersed into dust.The night was so cold,silent and eerie.Even the flames had no noise.The moon was bloodshot red.Everything and everybody was dead...including the King.

The moral lesson we can learn from this story I made was that making the right decisions can lead to a good destiny.If wrong decisions are made expect to pay for them.Hope you all enjoyed my story.This story is mine and was made on March 24-25 at my house.Any form of plagiarism will be heavily prosecuted :twisted: To the creators and administration long live the King!!!...but not this one :lol:
Sincerely,
Lightcry
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Post Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:05 am

Re: 2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

it was a fine story...but is it necessary to call him a fat B*s*t**d?
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Post Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:29 am

Re: 2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

Legit333 wrote:it was a fine story...but is it necessary to call him a fat B*s*t**d?


Agree if its not aloud in chat it should not be used here...

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Post Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:41 am

Re: 2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

but really great overall story! Loved it.
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Post Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:18 pm

Re: 2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

Very, very good story!
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Post Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:28 am

Re: 2 Steps From Hell and 998 From Heaven By:Lightcry

Great story buddy!
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