Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:12 pm
Grammar
Some various grammar issues in step by step help
1. The first step should be: Go to "task" and follow the task list to complete the tasks. When the task is complete click the "reward" button to collect task rewards. Note that before you collect the "reward", your warehouse needs to be upgraded so that you have the capacity for the rewards. You also upgrade your general title here. When you meet the requirements for upgrading a general title, click the button "completed" to complete the process.
2. Continue to upgrade your buildings and techs and continue to train troops, build traps, etc, to expand your city. Remember that these all require resources.
3. Create or join an alliance, or even make your own.
4. Send troops to hunt. This may harvest money or treasure if you are fortunate enough. If your troops are mighty enough, go occupy oases, fortified points, or other players' cities.
5. Go to the marketplace to trade resources or treasures.
6. Upgrade your general title. Go to "task" to complete the task, Upgrade General title. Note that you sometimes need treasures to upgrade, even if you have sufficient prestige.
7. Build more cities, as your new title allows you to build another.
8. In the section Alliance, it should say Players in the same alliance can’t attack each other.
9. Shop, should say: At the shop you may purchase coins.
10. 3rd sentence of general should say: Click Management to see more options.
11. Second sentence of map should say: The grid map is 600 * 600 with coordinates ranging from [0,0] to [600,600].
12. 3rd sentence on paragraph two of map should say: Different colors mark different groups.
13. In paragraph 3 of map in sentence 3, it should say: An oasis gives you extra resource output, but requires troops to take.
14. First sentence of barracks should say: At the barracks you can train infantry, cavalry, archers, and siege engines.
Unapproved members on alliance management needs to be spelled correctly.
Not a Haypi diss, just suggestions.
1. The first step should be: Go to "task" and follow the task list to complete the tasks. When the task is complete click the "reward" button to collect task rewards. Note that before you collect the "reward", your warehouse needs to be upgraded so that you have the capacity for the rewards. You also upgrade your general title here. When you meet the requirements for upgrading a general title, click the button "completed" to complete the process.
2. Continue to upgrade your buildings and techs and continue to train troops, build traps, etc, to expand your city. Remember that these all require resources.
3. Create or join an alliance, or even make your own.
4. Send troops to hunt. This may harvest money or treasure if you are fortunate enough. If your troops are mighty enough, go occupy oases, fortified points, or other players' cities.
5. Go to the marketplace to trade resources or treasures.
6. Upgrade your general title. Go to "task" to complete the task, Upgrade General title. Note that you sometimes need treasures to upgrade, even if you have sufficient prestige.
7. Build more cities, as your new title allows you to build another.
8. In the section Alliance, it should say Players in the same alliance can’t attack each other.
9. Shop, should say: At the shop you may purchase coins.
10. 3rd sentence of general should say: Click Management to see more options.
11. Second sentence of map should say: The grid map is 600 * 600 with coordinates ranging from [0,0] to [600,600].
12. 3rd sentence on paragraph two of map should say: Different colors mark different groups.
13. In paragraph 3 of map in sentence 3, it should say: An oasis gives you extra resource output, but requires troops to take.
14. First sentence of barracks should say: At the barracks you can train infantry, cavalry, archers, and siege engines.
Unapproved members on alliance management needs to be spelled correctly.
Not a Haypi diss, just suggestions.
