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Moke199

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:39 am

My poem. Please don't copy.

If you copy it, please credit me. Thanks.
I fear the place where evil will dwell, 
Within the very dark depths of hell.
Where demons and darkness will always roam,
But never find a place, that they can call home.
Stuck in a never-ending pit of despair,
They serve their master, and stay in his lair.
This man is a man who we call hades,
He does not care about men or ladies.
With the slightest of effort, he can slay people, 
And the journey of Hell begins in a steeple.
This steeple is a graveyard, a graveyard of bones,
When you walk by, you might here some moans.
These moans, are not to be taken so slight, 
As they are the dead, and you can have fright.
So remember, graveyards are of no hex,
You better watch out, or you might be next.
Hope you enjoyed it!
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Bobbityjoe

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:13 am

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

Geez man depressing much?
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K2700

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:27 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

WOW! thats acctually really good :D
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Rogue17

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:31 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

Good job but if you ever do another one remember to put it in off-topic ok? since it has nothing to do with haypi shouldnt really be in general discussion:)
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redgun

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:46 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

Yup what Sir Rogue has said ^^
And it's nice :P
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Gabe12

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:49 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

Great job=) I like it!!! keep it up!
"Never give up"

oh, this times are hard, there making us crazy, don't give up on me baby.

http://www.haypi.com/forum/viewtopic.ph ... 783#p83783 Check it out and give me feedback.
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Moke199

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:33 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

Yeah I accidentally wasn't paying attention and I was really sleepy. Sorry but next time I'll put it in off topic. Thanks for the good comments.
You know you like OUTLANDERS. Love is like a flower, after a while, it dies.
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Rogue17

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:02 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

oh ok cool just making sure you know where it should go:)
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Khades

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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:25 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

It's pretty nice, good job!
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Post Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:11 pm

Re: My poem. Please don't copy.

Nice.
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